【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
. w1 Z8 c% U! G. M! ~The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
) s0 q- Y% M8 n6 F8 q: {& KWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" o: ^0 O# m/ zI would probably know how you feel
) g2 x( @* e' {7 y) {9 ELove… just the word love
, H5 [# i) u* }# D9 _6 v7 o9 @4 qWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 ]3 k/ @; i3 K# NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ G2 J. S0 y, B! y/ `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
5 q) z" G" b0 T/ dWhy is it so difficult to express?
, l, A! F! J- D  k' Z$ qI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
  {+ ]8 q% `0 ^4 |0 XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 d: {, v! O' x9 R/ q1 V7 B( R  iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( I9 Z: a% D: {' f5 f/ m<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! N7 I8 I- }  t) B) s7 F: l! s<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ V. w- a9 q+ A6 h. M  L0 a<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! s/ U. @0 i% ~1 X<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 C! I. n( d, Q, t+ {7 j8 u) ?<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 t! J* O: V6 ^! F+ d, q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 w/ R2 D/ w: {6 a<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 T3 P' V& A6 N8 y% V% F<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
+ s8 s2 T; h* o, a<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 q  v, k2 }. [: m<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ P3 {; Q# U& ~8 }7 `7 X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 p' _3 z4 E# s4 J7 u/ B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% W# e9 u1 }, G6 w" G<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  J( D' t$ t. M  s( k4 g0 e0 e<P>But I never did </P>
0 }; a  B* `% I3 d+ s" \: |<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' C; I* N5 ^: Q, b) F7 g* X<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 ?' T$ O5 ~" g5 Q- B<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 X; G- V. j. z% A, p6 w+ p" l0 j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 g/ U4 M  x6 u& p# e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 n0 p& |* V5 h5 y5 |<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' X- Z4 j  K3 ?" o$ d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>