【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 o" L* I' o- P; Z& ?+ t/ G7 KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# L1 S/ ^$ q; `; i8 l7 G; UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 y$ y  e4 D* h5 R! B/ l" q& AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' Q* j4 L- ?% V3 DThe sky is happy down to its soul
; c9 t0 I  l& X% k- |/ E* ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; x: A: x! r: `' XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 Z) _- k! a. wEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 o3 T0 G: n( s& a- qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 Y( g4 v- _9 W/ g: y1 YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 E6 i7 p5 @$ M% q' C/ yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 M% P0 g! \$ E& E+ W( g. WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* B7 T- `" J. u5 L2 _7 \4 o) \9 PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, M" g9 v+ l& r1 F0 s( O; E- \, G0 E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 i0 c4 Z$ F  i+ T' X" U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; `0 Q5 o. ~% q& N  w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ N/ R  n  B% h  F- u- w, E# E4 P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 u. ~; f9 W& Z+ _5 B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: b0 ?# n0 y$ a: F: j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: Y+ H& _. M# h! J: G9 H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 j2 c* S+ ]/ Z+ Z/ ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( P6 U* R9 v8 K$ S) a5 N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ t% j5 R) O6 |( J, s) [: @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ Z9 s# z/ R- \# u" k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 Y9 K/ w- E, q4 f  S2 N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. j1 A% m, I# z0 d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ `! ]8 v# n: {0 u% Y& z: o$ M2 r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ Q3 z0 k+ W, g# U' \0 \9 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ w9 {0 L$ ~; o  `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" c* `6 |8 [, l, Z3 N& R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  N' Z# D! g# R5 G0 B( j# ]3 ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 L$ p: ~6 ]( z  R- l+ m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  B: V8 F8 E& g* z% k- P9 |* L0 h5 P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% G$ B( e/ R- Y' Q& j+ ^& }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 n& Y9 M+ J* n2 S% Y. S9 e! [9 P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 a: l; G6 j( k/ Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- ]+ f4 r" o5 {9 U" f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) q/ L* C# F4 _& i<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 ?; O' }! B- R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ M+ ^" u( G. t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 ?) c) ?- ^: T; E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ Z( e% x6 {/ ^: C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 z, f, O$ k4 i) ?- Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  z* l# h; @9 J" @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>